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Post by RydCook on Nov 28, 2006 20:20:49 GMT
Hey hey people, so this is the first video i've done for my film production course.. its crap because we had no guidance and wernt taught the crap editing software etc etc etc blaah blah blah. Made a lot of mistakes and stuff, i know its bad but yeah tell me what ya think Most important thing is that it vaguely looks and sounds like we're outside.
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Post by Dave on Nov 29, 2006 0:05:27 GMT
Weird little scene that.
"I've been playing places you haven't even seen in your dreams"
That line stood out for me... as just being really odd! hehe.
The footsteps you hear are clearly not outside, and the voices have the reverb of being in a room. Even so, the 'outdoors' sounds are not over played, and the shadow effect of tree branches is good. The insect landing on the face was a bit too much perhaps.
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Post by RydCook on Nov 29, 2006 11:28:03 GMT
ha ha cheers mate. do you mean the footsteps at the start? cos they were actually recorded outside. Yeah nothing we could do about the reverb on the voices, we used the mics on the cameras, and a dub would have looked horrid. And i dont think the software had anything to get rid of the reverb thing sucks really. Ha ha yeah the insect thing is a little cheesey but meh. I also found the "i've been to places you havn't sene in your dreams" a little weird.. i didnt write it so yeah. The line just didnt seem like a usual reply to what the other guy was saying, had trouble remembering it cos it was weird. Cheers for the feedback dave
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Post by Dave on Nov 29, 2006 21:43:44 GMT
I didn't notice the footsteps at the beginning so they must be fine. The footsteps at the end were the clip clippety clop ones! hehe
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Post by Hyde on Nov 29, 2006 22:08:19 GMT
Reminded me of the show.... I didnt know what the hell was going on
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Post by RydCook on Nov 30, 2006 13:42:27 GMT
I didn't notice the footsteps at the beginning so they must be fine. The footsteps at the end were the clip clippety clop ones! hehe ha ha ha! yeah.. musta forgot to put the sound on for the end ones! ha ha. ahh well. Of the "show" hyde? :S
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Post by Hyde on Nov 30, 2006 14:07:15 GMT
Lost....
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Post by RydCook on Nov 30, 2006 15:17:13 GMT
OOOH ha ha ha!! i get it. I probably shouldn't have called it lost really.. just a quick decision before uploading to youtube. And yeah it is a bit random, its not really meant to be a film as such, just a bit of dialogue that would go in a film kinda thing
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