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Post by Dazza on Sept 27, 2007 19:17:01 GMT
Film Synopsis: Mr Black only works alone but when the chance comes to settle an old score with the man who killed his brother he can't resist teaming up with an unlikely allie. Shot last year and finally been put together properly. Enjoy  |
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Post by Dave on Oct 3, 2007 19:47:10 GMT
That was a nice bit of work. Good to see your regular acting talent, even if there was no cry of "Ere, Bry!" at any point. ;D
With regards to the music... when Duran Duran came on, I thought "this is a bit over done"... I think a nice instrumental bit may have been a better fit.
Also with the music, I think you could improve the fade out of the music by also fading the image to black. Pause on black for a second or two, then cut to the new scene. Not sure what you think of that idea, but I think it would give it a smoother feel if the image matched the music fading.
That farm location is great for many ideas isn't it!
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Post by Dazza on Oct 12, 2007 15:41:23 GMT
Hey Dave, thanks for the feedback. Yea I can appreciate what your saying about the ordinary world song, I basically ran out of instrumentals to use and kind of took that piece of music from a scene in Layercake.
The farm location is brilliant, I have a film that I wrote ages ago which was inspired a little from DMS and lots of people have said its a good script but I havent got round to shooting it yet. I'm using that building used in the film above but for a scene where it will have to be a garage, its owned by the guy who plays Brian (Farm)/ Mr Black (OWA) parents.
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