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Post by Deleted on May 9, 2008 20:48:04 GMT
Hi guys, great forum...... This is a film me and my mate made in starbucks and borders 2 weeks ago... Love to know wht u guys think.... Ollie |
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Post by RydCook on May 10, 2008 19:44:20 GMT
Just watched.... well its pretty good considering it was shot min 20 mins. And i get it. But its a little... I dunno.... blank is all i can think of to describe it. Nice little idea i guess though. and welcome to the forums  |
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Post by Deleted on May 12, 2008 18:28:59 GMT
cheers for checkin it out,
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Post by Dave on May 12, 2008 22:25:32 GMT
NO BLOOD! ;D If you didn't know the title of this film, then you wouldn't know for certain what it was all about. I think a film should work without an explanatory title. *SPOILER* At the end we find out he was waiting for someone, but without knowledge of the title, it could have been anyone really. It wasn't like he was waiting in obvious 'date' places like a table-for-two or something, and the phone conversation could have been to a mate, a work-mate, an estranged father.. anyone. Maybe I'm making too much of the title telling the story, but that's just my opinion anyway.  |
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Post by Deleted on May 12, 2008 23:08:35 GMT
Thx for the comment, I agree with what you say....
There wasnt any planing for the film, we both met up in Town and said "right lets make a film."
We wanted to have a big twist at the end, but after filming for 30mins we could see that the Borders staff wanted us too go, so we did the quick ending...
Would be nice to go back and change the ending....
Ollie
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Post by tommaughan1989 on May 24, 2008 23:19:22 GMT
I really liked it, especially the simplicity of it all. I could see it as a great opening of a feature film.
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Post by oysterboyeddie on May 30, 2008 13:06:40 GMT
Excellent little short mate, although a little bland.
Can I ask, what kind of camera did you use? I like the rectangular screen more so than the square screen. That sounds a tad silly.
Once again, a well made short.
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Post by Gonga on Jun 6, 2008 16:13:39 GMT
20 second add for Starbucks in the first shot of the film, your gonna clean up in this business my friend.
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Post by shindig on Jun 6, 2008 16:16:30 GMT
I must counter this with a Ringon's Tea ad.
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Post by Gonga on Jun 6, 2008 16:17:41 GMT
Personally I think Bovrill could do with the exposure.
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Post by shindig on Jun 6, 2008 16:19:45 GMT
They get plenty of adspace at some footy games, surprisingly.
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