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Post by tommaughan1989 on May 24, 2008 22:30:27 GMT
Hey, I made this film with friends for my Film Studies coursework and wanted some feedback and thought this was the place for it. Check it out, and please criticise as much as you want, it's the only way I'll improve. uk.youtube.com/watch?v=0EoaH28Bvxs |
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Post by shindig on May 25, 2008 8:06:36 GMT
Fuck. What a bunch of charvs. Alreet, mind.
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Post by Dazza on May 25, 2008 9:30:22 GMT
Nice idea and a very good first short film Tom. Nice touching storyline with a bigger picture about morals and judging people or the way they behave. The acting was good and the music fitted will. I also liked the Peep show style camera view where you were looking through the characters eyes. The only other thing that may improve next time could be more of a variety of camera angles.
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Post by anonlytwin on May 25, 2008 11:26:50 GMT
"she let me finger her pisshole", definitely worth five minutes of my team just to hear that line
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