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Post by Deleted on Jul 11, 2008 19:25:41 GMT
this is the first film i was involved with
i wrote the script, did some camerawork and editing (and directing)
Synopsis -
2 burglars who are on a small crime spree, decide to rob one last house. Unknown to them, the house belongs to a vicious serial killer, who traps them inside.
let me know what u think!
im not expecting awards or anything
just thought id share!! ;D
the ADR and foley is completely out of sync in some places
which annoys me when i watch it, but oh well!
theres also a song after the film that Paul made using quotes from the film
(Paul is the dead body in the bathtub)
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Post by Dazza on Jul 11, 2008 19:42:57 GMT
Right then what can I say......... ;D
I've seen quite a lot of shite lately on the short film front so this was so refreshing to see some talent. For your first film stand up and take a bow as it was bloody good Andrew.
Nice use of shots, tripod and moving camera, I like.
The way you switch between colour and black and white, I like
The twist at the end, brilliant.
Acting, pretty good, like the use of the Eastern european characters.
Ok I agree there were some out of sync places but you have obviously taken note of this and will work on this more on your next film.
Brilliant first film, well done mate and look forward to seeing more from you in the future.
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Post by shindig on Jul 11, 2008 20:32:31 GMT
The Daily Mail's going to fucking love this...
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Post by Deleted on Jul 11, 2008 21:01:18 GMT
thanks Dazza, really appreciate the positive comments!
ye the black and white is to represent the past
and colour for the present
im writing a new script at the moment so i'll keep you all updated!
Shindig - that good or bad?? lol
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Post by Deleted on Jul 11, 2008 23:22:36 GMT
oh by the way, this film was for a module at University
not a personal project
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Post by dude on Jul 13, 2008 9:53:41 GMT
Have to agree with Dazza great potential there nice camera work if its your first film a great horror could be just round the corner filmsuk.art.officelive.comPaul. |
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Post by salvador on Jul 13, 2008 10:05:16 GMT
Hey Andrew, really great work. Some great shot choices and use of the camera. I thought it was a brilliant effort for a first film, the potential talent shines through..... let us know what else you are up to!
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Post by Deleted on Jul 14, 2008 11:31:11 GMT
thanks guys!!  |
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Post by Dave on Jul 14, 2008 12:39:52 GMT
I concur! It was top-notch!
After watching it, I could just imagine the same idea being made really badly because it has the usual elements of an amateur film... crime and gore! ;D But you pulled it off brilliantly so it didn't feel 'studenty' or lame.
I loved the rolling camera footage of them legging it!
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Post by Deleted on Jul 14, 2008 17:10:06 GMT
cheers mate! lol that low angle shot of them running away was me sat on a skateboard holding the camera pulled backwards glad it didnt feel like a student film to you, even tho it was! |
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Post by Barryo on Jul 16, 2008 14:40:29 GMT
Good stuff ;D My fav shot was the bathroom door opening and the thief not seeing the blood scene, that was great. One thing though, this shot could have had even more of an impact if you didn't show us previous shots of the said scene, but that's just my opinion mate, and I'm no professional  Well done! |
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Post by RydCook on Jul 17, 2008 23:06:13 GMT
Really nice... some really clever film-making in there mate! Certainly doesn't look like a first film. Very good indeed. Really enjoyed it.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 19, 2008 22:24:08 GMT
thanks guys!!!
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