Mooching about.
Dec 2, 2008 20:25:43 GMT
Post by domjenkinson on Dec 2, 2008 20:25:43 GMT
FADE IN
INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT
DOMINIC, 35, breathes warmth into his fingers. Taps on an archaic keyboard. Under woolly hat, he looks as cold as his stark bedroom.
................................DOMINIC
.................................(to self)
......................Um, hello. My name's Dom, and I'm a --
A pause. Shakes his head.
...................................DOMINIC
.......................Cliched. Try do something original to
......................announce you're here.
He hated the was his dialogue sounded so on the nose, expositionary... He realise his business line were now unfilmable.
He sits back. Rubs five o' clock shadow. Five o' clock yesterday.
He has nothing. He reaches for the mouse --
..................................................................................FADE OUT.
INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT
DOMINIC, 35, breathes warmth into his fingers. Taps on an archaic keyboard. Under woolly hat, he looks as cold as his stark bedroom.
................................DOMINIC
.................................(to self)
......................Um, hello. My name's Dom, and I'm a --
A pause. Shakes his head.
...................................DOMINIC
.......................Cliched. Try do something original to
......................announce you're here.
He hated the was his dialogue sounded so on the nose, expositionary... He realise his business line were now unfilmable.
He sits back. Rubs five o' clock shadow. Five o' clock yesterday.
He has nothing. He reaches for the mouse --
..................................................................................FADE OUT.
Welcome aboard, dom.
