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Post by dude on Jun 30, 2008 21:24:16 GMT
When you owe you Pay Gangster short some production stills we shot the film over the weekend     |
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Post by Dazza on Jul 1, 2008 9:35:16 GMT
Like I said in the other post its all looking really good Paul, from the photos I'm looking forward to seeing the finished result. You look like yopu are really going for it on this one.
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Post by Tom on Jul 1, 2008 10:24:23 GMT
Good looking stuff. It's a buzz when you get on set eh?
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Post by dude on Jul 1, 2008 11:30:10 GMT
yes Tom think there the best two days that i have had in a long time things all fell into place thanks again Dazza
it was all down to cast & crew of which i could not of asked more from
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Post by salvador on Jul 1, 2008 12:29:26 GMT
Liking the photos mate, the angles of the shots are great. You look like one sinister dude!
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Post by dude on Jul 1, 2008 15:44:53 GMT
Cheers  |
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Post by dude on Jul 6, 2008 9:28:52 GMT
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Post by dude on Aug 1, 2008 17:27:49 GMT
a short film by Paul Easter
WARNING SWEARING THIS IS A GANGSTER FILM
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Post by billywizz on Aug 1, 2008 18:09:22 GMT
frightening....i truly had to watch that through my fingers....
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Post by Tom on Aug 1, 2008 20:04:35 GMT
Okay, I'm gonna be completely straight here -
Bad stuff - The acting of the guy who got cut up needs work. I don't know, maybe it's just me, but he was a little stale and amateur. Also, the dialogue - don't have too much swearing in it when it comes to shooting the film. Trust me, I know it's a writer's habitual problem when they draft early scripts, but if you have f*cking and c*nt as every other word, it doesn't work. The audience only hears the stream of swearing, and even the rowdiest squaddies don't swear as much as that in real life.
Good stuff - your performance was good, so well done.
Decent angles and set ups all tightly put together.
Great effects work.
You seem to have a cohesive plot, and it's a keen sign of a good film on the horizon... So good luck!
Tom.
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Post by dude on Aug 1, 2008 21:57:39 GMT
hey Tom thanks for the comments i can see the f - ing n c's from this right away thats it's to much only seen the film today for the first time i think the sync has gone out in upload.We had just 6 hours to shoot with the makeup artist etc.So your comments are of great help and important to me it was all put together very very fast and just wanted a Punch value effect thanks for your comments on my performance it means a great deal to me
Paul
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Post by shindig on Aug 2, 2008 6:34:51 GMT
Not bad. The swearing was certainly overcooked, mind. Using a quick cut just to get a shot of the victim saying "Awww, fack!" seemed a tad unneccessary.
Given he's about to be cut, battered or whatever, he needs to have the fear of God into him.
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Post by Tom on Aug 2, 2008 10:34:27 GMT
Given he's about to be cut, battered or whatever, he needs to have the fear of God into him. Yes indeed. He's gonna have to ramp up the performance a little if it's gonna work. But yeah, smart to have a dry run before you make the film. Good luck. |
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Post by dude on Aug 2, 2008 11:00:02 GMT
Cheers Shindig and Tom yes i agree fully. Wayne is a mate of mine & has never acted before it was has first line ever. But the swearing is going to be cut down it was as Tom says a test for all and the new Sony Ex1 camera which it was the first test of also.It has a array of settings and the Sony factory setup is not great but we have now found some great new
custom setup mode's
cheers for watching my film
Paul.
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Post by Dazza on Aug 2, 2008 12:02:19 GMT
Hey Paul,
Bad part:
I agree the dialogue needs a lot of work buddy. Far too many F**ks and C**ts its almost every other word and is too much so learn from this for the main film.
Good part:
The film visually looked nice tho, I liked the variety of shots and angles used, the filming of the car on the move and the slowmo and sound effects and the sick grin on the other guys face when you cut the guys hand off. You can definately pull off playing the nutjob role. I also liked the use of the dog and the dark humour at the end.
Nice one ;D
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